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You could never be strangers again
in that void of charged space
between the eyes and the air.
And the other people, who are
less than faces in the crowd.

Maybe it was a true dream of
dark times, always walking,
you are thief protected by gloss
that they could break
if only they knew how.

The lion at the zoo could
jump the fence, the wolves
could dig beneath the glass.

Safety is a mutual ignorance,
and it is something to be reminded
through wilds of the woods,
that she has fangs
and so do you.
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*Me2Smart4U 1 day ago  Student Digital Artist
WOW...There is a lot of powerful emotions within this poem...
The contrast of this piece is expressed very strongly....
I've enjoyed the creative flow :clap:
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*FallingAsleepTonight 1 day ago  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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:iconme2smart4u:
*Me2Smart4U 1 day ago  Student Digital Artist
most welcome :hug:
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:iconaaron886:
I'm finding that I read this FREQUENTLY. Really fantastic art.
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:iconfallingasleeptonight:
*FallingAsleepTonight Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hey thanks man
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~summerpoetry Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
this is really lovely.
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:iconhayleypoole94:
When you say 'gloss' do you mean 'glass' or am I missing a metaphor? Beautifully profound, as always.
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:iconfallingasleeptonight:
*FallingAsleepTonight Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I actually mean gloss, though in context it has a similar meaning :)
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:iconaaron886:
New favorite.
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*leyghan Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
These words have a dark power. <----- My lame poetic attempt at expressing how very much I love this. :+fav:
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