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Celvas Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015
Well, you got me hooked. This is genius.
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FallingAsleepTonight Featured By Owner May 1, 2015   Writer
Thank you
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Celvas Featured By Owner May 1, 2015
It's funny how you built up suspense by writing your piece like this. It feels written in the manner of a paradox, except that it isn't one. To me, suspense was always in the things that weren't said, weren't done. Suspense is like romance. There must always be a reason for the guy to not get the girl (or vice versa). Suspense rides on what the reader doesn't know, what the prots don't say, what they don't do, especially when we want them to. It makes for an interesting fact that the best entertainment we can provide is torturing the minds of our audience.
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CrazySOB42 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Student General Artist
I have a really big love/hate relationship with suspense. :XD:
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Relic-Angel Featured By Owner May 17, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconclapplz: I think the trick is leaving your readers at a cliffhanger. :laughing:
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:iconholophite:
Holophite Featured By Owner May 3, 2013   General Artist
That's a beauty!!
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Vanessanon Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2013  Professional Writer
lol. love it.
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PastelPaintPrincess Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Bahaha this is great XD
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SweetsAndCharades Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013
Awesome! :D
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MintyMintamin Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Is this another one of
your famous 6 word poems
I see?

I know I haven't commented in a long time. >.>; Terribly sorry about that. Been busy playing catch-up in school.

Anyways. . . How are you?
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:iconfallingasleeptonight:
FallingAsleepTonight Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013   Writer
Things have been fine, class has been tough for me too
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:iconmintymintamin:
MintyMintamin Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
ah. . .
I hear ya. . .

Where I'm at. . . It's a winner takes all, kind of challenge >.>;
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chromeantennae Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
So simple, so short, so genius. :lmao: Great job with such few words. :XD:
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AgiStar Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013   Traditional Artist
Aren't we clever? =3
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brokengod--veins Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
clever :laughing:
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AnAwkwardBlue Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013
There are 2 rules to success:
1. Never tell anyone everything you know.

Clever! :3
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EmpurpleThePanda Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
this is so amazingly annoying that its making me hate you nicely sooooo much
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fma-scc-n Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Student General Artist
I'm sure I will never master the art of suspense as well as you do~
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:iconmbrsart:
mbrsart Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's like playing a C major scale and stopping on the B.
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FallingAsleepTonight Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013   Writer
Hahaha, nice
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Imadopted Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
I wish I could write as suspenseful as you.
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Cygam-7 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013   Traditional Artist
Hahahaaha indeed :D
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leogirl321 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconclapplz: Beautiful.
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TheatherOfAWitch Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
XD
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caramello-cookie Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
;n; that hurts so bad oh gosh I wanted to know so badly!
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CosmicCupcak3 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
What is it!? Lol XD
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SpecialVore Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
LOL!!!
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Yamaha160 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
y u do dis :stare:
hahaha
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ciela101 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconclapplz:
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Silvador Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
Brilliant. Simply brilliant.
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:iconspiica:
Spiica Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
trololo.
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charrington Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
Brilliant.
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Dragnia Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Student General Artist
I can't even xD I read this, thought it had pushed enter a thousand times, clicked it...
..*claps*
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Clockchat Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013
Hahahaha, masterfully played.
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FiyeroTigelaar Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol i like it
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Sinnomangirl Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
bwahahaha amazing.
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TheAntiAnti-Drug Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Haha, thank you for this.
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mythlover20 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Professional Writer
Ooh... nicely done.

You, my dear, are evil. Congratulations. :P
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ohio-writer Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student Writer
nice.
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Child-of-Eire Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
you are a troll. well done.
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MarkTShaw Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
When I saw the title I was like - "aw, you arrogant fuck". I was determined to troll you hard. Then I read the line and thought it was quite brilliant.
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FallingAsleepTonight Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013   Writer
Hahahaha, thank you
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ckittykatty Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
--cutting off unexpectedly in
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4sauce4 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2013  Student Writer
Duhduhduuuuhh
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