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alone

still the olympic lights. a bitter almond breeze,        soul-numbing & grounding. and a band of thugs, and a woman waiting in vain to catch a ride.          further and further away. none of this will ever be captured on film.   you can erase the place but you can't stamp out the stink   and how it accretes and why do you remain so sharply eagle-eyed uncomfortable sober. pushing for a space between molecules where you feel you are not                                           wanted into the sanitizing chill of an empty bridge and highway. a fascinated child,    your icy mittenprint on the kiosk window now shattered but you kno

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Literature

Trellis

I teach a caterpillar How to conceal its markings On a grapevine that grasps The trellis, trimming Chewed leaves. Bigger Bite marks upon bite marks. A rotten apple-core chrysalis Is hanging on a vine. All it ever does is change. I taught the grapevine Where to grasp the trellis. And all it ever does is want.

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Literature

alone

still the olympic lights. a bitter almond breeze,        soul-numbing & grounding. and a band of thugs, and a woman waiting in vain to catch a ride.          further and further away. none of this will ever be captured on film.   you can erase the place but you can't stamp out the stink   and how it accretes and why do you remain so sharply eagle-eyed uncomfortable sober. pushing for a space between molecules where you feel you are not                                           wanted into the sanitizing chill of an empty bridge and highway. a fascinated child,    your icy mittenprint on the kiosk window now shattered but you kno

Literature

49 deviations
Coldest Day of Winter

Visual

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Daily Lit Recognition for May 23rd, 2014

Daily Lit Recognition for May 23rd, 2014 We are proud to feature today's Daily Literature Deviations! You can show your support by :+favlove:ing this News Article. Please comment and :+fav: the features and congratulate the artists! Poetry Featured by: chromeantennae (https://www.deviantart.com/chromeantennae) :thumb453072429: gladiator. by crooked-clockwork (https://www.deviantart.com/crooked-clockwork) The imagery of this piece is sharp and the emotional narrative leaves you wondering what this piece really entails... Suggested by: ghostinafog (https://www.deviantart.com/ghostinafog) Featured by: betwixtthepages (https://www.deviantart.com/betwixtthepages) :thumb455110229: Syntax by FallingAsleepTonight (https://www.deviantart.com/fallingasleeptonight) From the suggester: So simple and so powerful, this poem will leave you devastated -

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Literature

Urchin (Rewrite)

"Urchin" to those who know him – or of him Nameless to visiting strangers for painless anonymity best of all or at least anonymous pain Sheaves of crackled, yellowing parchment with the Orphan Master's chop Fourteen Years branded on with runny ink that ran out a year ago There is money to be made harvesting the clammy corpses of shells on damp sand Glistening as the ocean exhales Every day the same pair of spindly legs wades through pools Searching Rippled air basks in seasonal heat Marinating foreign, motionless bodies that lie ignorant of fleeting footprints carved in sand Of unruly, spiked hair that resists stiff

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