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i have not read enough poetry
and i am not one to muse
or maybe think
but i do have
a question
i am one student in a freshman course
who wonders
why so many poets use only
lower case

is it artistic
is it sexy
to write as if
you do nothing but whisper

i want to be loud
i want
the survivors of death
to remember me

i will not mutter
like a fetus
trapped
undeveloped

perhaps there is
nothing to this
technicality

but there is value
in knowing how to yell
and in absolute
silence.
A bit of an experiment, and a comment. Not trying to bash.
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Jasemana's avatar
Excellent, interesting.  I might have chosen to put the word "absolute" in caps, but it's a technicality.  Cheers!